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"See, Fenn! I told you so!" grinned Eleven cheekily, pointing at a huge T-Rex.

Fenn sighed, "You just wanted to say that, didn't you?"

Eleven ignored her and just kept running about excitedly, gasping in admiration at all the different species of dinosaur he could see from the hill where the TARDIS had landed. Amy stepped out tentatively, "Urgh. What's that smell?"
Fenn grinned back at her, "That would be the dinosaur package that the Doctor landed the TARDIS next to."

"Oh," said Amy, pulling a face that made Fenn chuckle. Rory poked his head out too, "Whoa. Look at those trees, Amy- they're huge!"

A giant, scaly foot fell in the middle of the clearing they were standing in. Rory and Amy stared up at the creature it was attached to, and there mouths fell open. Priceless, Fenn thought as she took a snapshot. That was one for her study wall.

The brontosaurus moved on, its giant, gentle stride moving majestically through the thick forest. Fenn gazed up at it, and her mouth fell open too.

The gentle beast rose far above the tree-tops, and everything about it was purely awesome, in the original sense of the word. But that's not what surprised Fenn.

There he was- Eleven was sitting on the dinosaur. Fenn called up at him, "What in the name of time and space ARE YOU DOING?"

His voice came faintly back, "Going for a joy ride!"

"YOU IDIOT!" she shouted in reply. Amy and Rory looked at her, and immediately they all burst into helpless laughter, and chased after him.
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Haha I wrote this for a friend and decided to put it up. I like writing with Eleven- it's so much fun. :D

Am I the only one who can totally see Eleven doing this?

This piece is in celebration of 2,000 pageviews! :D Thanks, everyone! :D

Doctor Who (c) BBC
Fenn (c) Me :)
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~NikitaDarkstar Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yhea.. the Rassilon thing would obviously be a Time Lord exlusive...

Was considering using "for Rassilons sake!" in a chapter of my fic, but then I realised that the Doctor has gone native enough to use more human exlaminations... and the Master most likely would never even say that name again.. so settled with a more normal one. (But totally going to use "time and space!" in a later fic... well unless you mind a lot since you put it in print first! XD)
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~Aredell Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, probably. I can't see anyone else having a strong enough connection to Gllifrey to use that.

Yeah, well 11's not as native as 10 was... if he was native he'd know what football was and that bow ties generally aren't cool. But still, I can see what you mean. (That's fine. I don't mind at all :) it's not like I own time and space :XD: )
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~NikitaDarkstar Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
True that.. 10 was a human with two hearts more or less. 11 is an alien that happens to look human more or less. Except for the bowtie and fez.
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~Aredell Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, Eleven is somewhat more... strange. Good strange, though.
I suppose Ten is the most human of all the Doctors. I guess that's why people love him.
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~NikitaDarkstar Mar 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Probably. 10 was just so intense and so easy to connect to. And I admit I still miss him. ^^;
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~Aredell Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I miss Ten too, but towards the end he did get a bit doom 'n' gloom. No fun. :(
'spose that's why Eleven seems like a breath of fresh air.
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definetely the case with eleven!
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~Aredell Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha yeah, I know! :D
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That's it, this needs to happen. I will not have lived until I've seen Eleven riding a dinosaur.

I may very well have to draw this. When school is done crushing the life out of me.
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~Aredell Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha I know, that would be the best scene ever! :D

You're welcome to- I'd love to see it XD Yeah, school's been squishing the life out of me too.
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