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Ever so softly the snow fell that night. 'Twas Christmas Eve 2005; and the white snow fell like tears.

The Doctor staggered through the snow... he knew that he had seen her- remembered her- met her- for the final time.

And Rose didn't know who he was.

Oh, how they'd run through the stars and watch them shine- he'd never forget her smile.
But she didn't know him. Not yet. She still had all that joy to come.

All that pain.

He collapsed, crying out in agony- he could see it coming, could almost grasp it with the tips of his fingers- the darkness. It loomed on the edge of his vision like a nightmare that the dreamer knows will come, as soon as they close their eyes.
Death.

But it wouldn't take him. Not completely. It would take this body, this form, this mind. But not him. He would still be there. On the edge of the light, reminding them that he was still there... if they would listen.

He was sobbing now, weeping like the clouds, the tears falling like the snow. He didn't want to leave- he didn't want to let go. He remembered all those times, all those people- he didn't want to leave all that behind.

But then he heard it- the voice of wisdom.
"This song is ending, but the story never ends."

The Doctor struggled up; he could see it now. The hope, the love, the joy. It drove the despair away, to hover at the edge of his mind. He walked towards the box- oh, how he loved that box.
He stepped inside, like he always did, dropped his coat over the bar, ignoring the rack, and stepped up to the console. The despair was returning, it was coming to find him again- he couldn't hold it off.
He stared at his hands. It was starting. He was dying, alone, again. Alone. The Lonely Angel. Soaring above the minds, hearts and dreams of six billion beautiful creatures.
He spoke.

"I don't want to go!"

Then the Angel fell.
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Yeah, I was sad. Enough said. End of Time was a depressing episode. :(
Doctor Who is owned by the BBC.
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Mood: Love ~lilarcher Dec 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely made me cry. I mean, the End of Time made me cry, but now you've given it even more emotion... I love it.
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~Aredell Dec 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou :)
I try to add emotion to these scenes by adding in the character's thoughts.
Glad you like it! :)
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~darkrose411 Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful! It made me cry. :happycry:
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~Aredell Nov 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou! :)
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~darkrose411 Nov 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
np. :)
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~Super-Skitty Nov 11, 2010  Student Writer
Aw, this brought a tear to my eye. :( The End of Time was epic and yet awful at the same time. This is beautiful... brings back lovely memories. *sniffs* Oh man, you've started me off now.

But I love this. It's simply amazing.

I might not even have minded QUITE so much if he didn't have to die all alone... T^T
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~Aredell Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
End of Time wouldn't have been so bad if 10 had had someone with him at the end. I hope I haven't made you too depressed/
:)
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~Super-Skitty Nov 11, 2010  Student Writer
My thoughts exactly. But don't worry about it - I'm alright. It's taken time, but I think I can face this sort of thing now. :)
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~Aredell Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah... I hope SM doesn't do that to 11. :| I don't think I could handle it again. D:
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~Super-Skitty Nov 11, 2010  Student Writer
Oh, me neither. :| It's such an awful way to go.
I can't really imagine 11 leaving now - he's just too happy to die.
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